tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post2070708671012090503..comments2023-09-03T04:22:01.805-05:00Comments on Angel Sharum's Story Board: A Crinkle in PlansUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-12981891490149765332012-03-07T06:09:16.726-06:002012-03-07T06:09:16.726-06:00I will change that, Di. Thank you. I need an edito...I will change that, Di. Thank you. I need an editor even for blog posts...lolAngelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-36310376166911400782012-03-06T16:25:21.827-06:002012-03-06T16:25:21.827-06:00Have to say I like the third one best. Although I...Have to say I like the third one best. Although I will add that it should be "She and her mother" as the subject of the clause or sentence. I liked the dialogue and the idea of a child demanding and being so self-assured about what was best in life. The first seemed to reach too hard to get the three words in, and I shudder to read about another's heart break. Too melodramatic usually for me. My heart has broken enough for me in this lifetime. I thoroughly liked that you wrote three quick glimpses into different stories using the prompts and asked commenters to pick one. It makes for a great blog read!Di Eats the Elephanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12067737807348338927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-88223822350649540842012-03-04T12:21:06.618-06:002012-03-04T12:21:06.618-06:00Thank you so much for the nice words, Jae.Thank you so much for the nice words, Jae.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-18204819047220003432012-03-04T06:31:56.582-06:002012-03-04T06:31:56.582-06:00I do love these triptychs..they make perfect sense...I do love these triptychs..they make perfect sense together somehow..as I read I thought the second was my favourite..and then I re-read and thought I couldn't choose..fantastic..you illustrate so much about life in so few words..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-5766935699169779602012-03-02T15:56:59.478-06:002012-03-02T15:56:59.478-06:00I like them too,Chris. Not that I'm supposed t...I like them too,Chris. Not that I'm supposed to have them...lolAngelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-26706878037984477982012-03-01T16:23:40.977-06:002012-03-01T16:23:40.977-06:00Nice play of the three words, I like curly fries i...Nice play of the three words, I like curly fries in Arby's, so crinkle fries should be good :-)Cgullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05278892052776188221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-65414191971563789882012-02-29T21:20:43.728-06:002012-02-29T21:20:43.728-06:00Very fun. I think I like the first the bestVery fun. I think I like the first the bestCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-16451153110169884002012-02-29T18:46:28.353-06:002012-02-29T18:46:28.353-06:00I'm glad y'all liked my little stories.I'm glad y'all liked my little stories.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-62888205019654881912012-02-29T18:28:20.786-06:002012-02-29T18:28:20.786-06:00Excellent work three complete stories with so few ...Excellent work three complete stories with so few wordsSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-78307388429296768582012-02-29T18:27:49.839-06:002012-02-29T18:27:49.839-06:00I like the 1st one best but, all three are good. L...I like the 1st one best but, all three are good. Loved the ketchup on the fries too :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-70292319147223938352012-02-29T18:23:51.185-06:002012-02-29T18:23:51.185-06:00Thanks, Belva.Thanks, Belva.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-41362598129390524022012-02-29T17:50:41.284-06:002012-02-29T17:50:41.284-06:00Great job and use of the prompt trio and to top it...Great job and use of the prompt trio and to top it all off you have created a trio of tales!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.com