tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post4529532559674642968..comments2023-09-03T04:22:01.805-05:00Comments on Angel Sharum's Story Board: Dying...AlmostUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-65812322305705659002010-05-17T21:15:11.906-05:002010-05-17T21:15:11.906-05:00You should check it out, Donna. Some really good p...You should check it out, Donna. Some really good poetry and stories put up by various writers each week.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-26582793492666515212010-05-17T20:37:45.415-05:002010-05-17T20:37:45.415-05:00I enjoyed this Angel! I keep reading about this On...I enjoyed this Angel! I keep reading about this One Word Wednesday or whatever it is, but haven't really checked it out. Guess I need to get busy and dig into things, huh?Donna Thackerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06255640442862265834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-77340906061665384642010-05-17T20:23:25.096-05:002010-05-17T20:23:25.096-05:00Thank you all so much. I was worried I hadn't ...Thank you all so much. I was worried I hadn't gotten everything across with this one that I wanted to but it seems I did.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-10944284226920583142010-05-17T14:21:48.253-05:002010-05-17T14:21:48.253-05:00loved that dying here seemed a small detail compar...loved that dying here seemed a small detail compared to everything else going on... as if the bother of a fly was bigger to her than death..one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/05/17/psychic-practice/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-91739118885746776622010-05-16T21:55:19.045-05:002010-05-16T21:55:19.045-05:00This was great! I can't wait to read more of y...This was great! I can't wait to read more of your work.Business IQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03383555340302028043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-24867142710064050522010-05-15T21:23:27.569-05:002010-05-15T21:23:27.569-05:00at first I thought she was actually dead because o...at first I thought she was actually dead because of the fly, then I felt good that she had been rescued, then I realized life had not been such a great thing for her. Great read - took me all those directions in that short little group of words! Well done!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-76378481297351732562010-05-13T11:39:31.654-05:002010-05-13T11:39:31.654-05:00Thanks for reading, y'all.
Tammy, I'm gl...Thanks for reading, y'all. <br /><br />Tammy, I'm glad you picked up on that because I was trying to get it across that she would rather have not been saved.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-86391016583582680062010-05-13T10:04:48.779-05:002010-05-13T10:04:48.779-05:00I really enjoyed this. I never thought of flies i...I really enjoyed this. I never thought of flies in Heaven. :) <br /><br />-Tim <br /><br />http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/05/adepta-sororitas.htmlTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-106498091970543792010-05-13T09:13:11.120-05:002010-05-13T09:13:11.120-05:00Interesting one, flies can be so obnoxious... I wo...Interesting one, flies can be so obnoxious... I wonder if her hand motion that startled him was successful in getting the fly :-). Thanks for reading mine as well and the helpful comment Angel!Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-36836054968790593412010-05-12T19:56:19.863-05:002010-05-12T19:56:19.863-05:00Good question Angel. She did not seem freaked so m...Good question Angel. She did not seem freaked so maybe heaven might have been her first choice.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-50626403477453677942010-05-12T17:20:32.527-05:002010-05-12T17:20:32.527-05:00it made me want to know more--exactly what happene...it made me want to know more--exactly what happenedpiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-64000541428280098562010-05-12T16:26:48.786-05:002010-05-12T16:26:48.786-05:00Thanks, y'all.
Andy, I don't know what n...Thanks, y'all. <br /><br />Andy, I don't know what no flies on me is in reference to...lolAngelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-71890663980333663342010-05-12T15:54:25.064-05:002010-05-12T15:54:25.064-05:00Phew, this is deep! 'No flies on me' sprin...Phew, this is deep! 'No flies on me' springs to mind, but I guess you had something else...<br /><br />Nicely!!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-13687711440889381342010-05-12T15:27:16.361-05:002010-05-12T15:27:16.361-05:00Loved the way you used the words here. Effortless ...Loved the way you used the words here. Effortless and completely unstilted. Is that a word?Carinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-21945148244684536232010-05-12T15:27:16.362-05:002010-05-12T15:27:16.362-05:00Love the way you incorporated the words. An excell...Love the way you incorporated the words. An excellent little vignette.Carinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-81293058147091345452010-05-12T14:56:27.052-05:002010-05-12T14:56:27.052-05:00Thanks, Thom, glad you liked it. Sorry I missed pl...Thanks, Thom, glad you liked it. Sorry I missed playing the last few weeks!Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1376556132502024923.post-18363007940742946262010-05-12T13:30:48.932-05:002010-05-12T13:30:48.932-05:00A great way to take the reading into this, the use...A great way to take the reading into this, the use of the fly. I like it.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.com