I hope y'all enjoy the outcome.
It seemed fitting, Sarah thought, that they should end up on
their knees. It was a place they were familiar with, having been brought there
on numerous occasions throughout their life together. She knew the outcome wasn’t
certain, that with God anything was possible, but Sarah believed evil was going
to finally win.
“Forgive them, Father,” Sarah started to pray, but was cut
off when the taller one hit her, knocking her over backward. She saw Paul
strain against his bonds to get to her and tried to tell him she loved him, but
her jaw no longer worked. She couldn’t even scream, but had to endure the
agonizing pain in silence.
Sarah remembered another time when she couldn’t talk to
Paul, although that time it was all on them. They were the cause of the
problems back then that had almost ended their relationship. Sarah had never
regretted the sleepless nights spent blaming Paul for something out of his
control more than she did in that moment.
She came to believe the doctor’s, and knew that Melissa
would still have died, even if Paul had gotten home on time, but it had taken
her way too long. Sarah knew she wasted months of their lives that could have
been spent growing closer, pushing him away. Paul had forgiven her, after he
forgave himself, and they worked their way back to each other.
They had both spent hours on their knees thanking God for
saving their marriage, and later, Sarah remembered her knees being bruised from
all the kneeling during her second pregnancy. Paul was right there beside her,
holding her hand. She wished she could hold his hand again.
The intruders had made sure that wasn’t possible from the
start. They rang the doorbell, and when Paul answered, burst through the door
so quickly they knocked him down. Before he could get up, the smaller man hit
him over the head with the butt of a rifle. Sarah screamed and ran to Paul’s
side, begging the men to take whatever they wanted and just leave. Little did
she know that what they wanted was everything.
As far as Sarah could tell, there was no reason for the
attack. She tried to cling to the small hope that a neighbor had heard her
screams earlier, but as the night wore on, it became harder, and finally, there
was no hope left.
Both Sarah and Paul watched the strangers murmur to each
other and then look their way. Paul inched closer to Sarah and she pushed her
head into his shoulder and cried. When they heard the hammer cock, Sarah raised
her head and kissed Paul one last time.
4 comments:
Very cleverly written - the contrast of being on one's knees praying for thanks..then for help..jae
Thanks, Jae. Glad you liked it.
Scary story!
aw what a sad story, very well written
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