Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Cause and Effect

This is my contribution to the Three Word Wednesday prompt. Hope you enjoy it!


Sean lined up, finding the perfect trajectory. With a last nervous look over his shoulder, he set the projectile on course, before ducking behind a concrete divider.

After hearing the first scream, Sean peeked around the divider. The chunks of red muck covering Casey William’s face brought a chuckle. The murderous look in her eye when she threw pudding at Sheila Brown added to his delight. At least now they have something to bicker about, he thought, slipping out the cafeteria doorway.

13 comments:

Daily Panic said...

vengence!

ThomG said...

Pudding Wars! I really like the "clean" vengeance in this, the innocence at work. That's honor I can get behind.

Tumblewords: said...

Whodathunk - a food fight! Cleverly done!

Angel said...

Thanks, y'all. I don't know why this was what I thought up with those words. Sometims I wonder about myself...lol.

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, for a moment I thought...

Megha said...

Nice. Great twist. Nicely written :)

bellamocha said...

I love this- fighting tends to be vindictive in the nastiest way and it's not often I'm taken back to my youth and the more innocent, harmless kind! Very well written, I really thought it was going to be nasty so this was a great twist.

And thanks for visiting mine, and the comment about the last line! It's funny, it sounded right in my head, but after posting it, leaving it an hour and then coming back to the screen, I could see what you mean...it felt a little out of place.
Bella :)

MichaelO said...

Food Fight!!!

AdellBeek said...

I like how you used the words to create a short piece that both reminds me of a food fight in school and made me think about hitting the target.

Angel said...

I'm glad everyone enjoyed this one. And, Bella, you are very welcome. I've done the same thing myself before.

blisshappens said...

nice nice nice!!! I love an instigator!! -Meg

gautami tripathy said...

Love that twist..

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