Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Retribution

This is my contribution for the Your Photo Story prompt this week. A little micro fiction piece I hope y'all enjoy.



Rain mingled with the tears cascading from Adrian’s eyes. She couldn’t believe he was gone.

Looking over her shoulder to make sure no one was around, she hissed, “I wish I’d been the one to put the bullet in your brain, you bastard,” before wiping away the tears, smiling, and heading home, safe at last.

3 comments:

Rose Works Jewelry said...

Loved the short piece :) Makes me wonder what the rest of the story is! Thanks for stopping by and leaving encouragement on my blog about my health problems. :)

Witchmojo said...

Nice work Angel. Short and to the point but powerful at the same time. Wish I had the skill to limit my words so readily!

Angel said...

It does get easier, Witch. I love micro/flash fiction so it's fun for me.

Thanks, Rose, and I do hope you feel better soon.