Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Living in the Moment

Here is my contribution for the Three Word Wednesday prompt. A short micro fiction piece this week.



A tremor ran through Eliza. Only a fragile thread of reality existed between sensation and the rampant descent into pure pleasure she knew was coming.

8 comments:

umapoems said...

The lines are deep.Nice

LeiffyV said...

Beautiful in its simplicity, saying so much with so little. Thanks for sharing!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Wow...very good use of the prompts..

Deborah said...

Brilliantly done, perfect!

Susannah said...

Oooh, I like this! ;-)

Nice one, and a great use of the words.

My 3WW

gautami tripathy said...

sensual...

corners

Ramesh Sood said...

rampant descent...

How fantastic can the word play be..can be seen in your poem.. well said.

Angel said...

Thanks, y'all, glad you liked it!