Jeremy was lucky to walk away with just a sliver of wood from the sled as a reminder of his near death experience. Were it not for a freak twist of fate, his downhill slide would have ended in disaster. Instead, his friends all had a good laugh when he barely clipped the tree and flipped head over heels.
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Yes, we have similar thoughts :-)
Micro fiction..I love that..made me smile also..Jae
Thanks for the comments, y'all.
niely done Angel....thanks for sharing your words
Interesting. Memories of childhood near-misses on snow and ice. Most children never think of them as "near-death experiences", so I get the feeling this person is a teenager.
I was envisioning the person in the story as late teens/early 20's, Mendur.
very nicely done a great micro story.
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