I haven't written anything in so long, y'all. It says my last blog post was 2015! I saw a contest on a group in Facebook and thought, why not. I'm a little rusty, but I hope y'all like the story. We had to keep it under 200 words. The photo prompt was of a little mouse in a guy's shirt pocket. This is what I came up with:
“Can I come out now, Jed?”
Jed pushed his little friend back in his pocket, firmly but
gently. “No, stay in there, Mickey.”
“But I wanna see what’s going on, Jed!” Mickey squeaked.
Jed looked around the room. “There’s nothing going on,
Mickey.” He hung his head and whispered, “There hasn’t been anything going on
for months.”
Mickey grew quiet as he watched a tear slide down Jed’s
cheek. He knew the solitude had been getting to Jed. He’d heard him cry at
night and watched him pace the floor during the day. And always, he had that
radio on, listening, hoping. Waiting.
That night was no different. After sharing a meal of pork
and beans with Mickey, Jed turned on the radio. He was still fiddling with the
buttons when a noise outside caught his attention. Jed almost stepped on Mickey
in his hurry to get to the door.
He couldn’t believe is eyes. His neighbors were laughing and
hugging each other. Over the noise, after the radio static broke, Jed heard, “You
stayed inside alone so that now you may come outside together. Breathe deeply,
my friends. It is safe.”
“We have won.”
3 comments:
LOVE it and timely!!! Great story!
Great job instantly had my attention and I 'followed the character pacing and racing to the door!
Thank you so much, Deb55! I'm glad you liked the story.
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