Here are my micro fiction's for Three Word Wednesday this week. Let me know which one you like best.
Story 1:
A crinkle formed on Charlie’s brow as he tried to navigate the busy intersection. A sudden demand from his GPS system turned the crinkle to an outright frown when he came to a stop just before hitting a newly constructed building.
Story 2:
It’s hard to navigate the twisting roads of a relationship. So many demands and mistakes put a crinkle in the love of even the best couples.
Story 3:
“I want crinkle fries,” was the demand Abby made while she and her mom navigated the frozen food section. “They hold ketchup better.”
12 comments:
Great job and use of the prompt trio and to top it all off you have created a trio of tales!
Thanks, Belva.
I like the 1st one best but, all three are good. Loved the ketchup on the fries too :)
Excellent work three complete stories with so few words
I'm glad y'all liked my little stories.
Very fun. I think I like the first the best
Nice play of the three words, I like curly fries in Arby's, so crinkle fries should be good :-)
I like them too,Chris. Not that I'm supposed to have them...lol
I do love these triptychs..they make perfect sense together somehow..as I read I thought the second was my favourite..and then I re-read and thought I couldn't choose..fantastic..you illustrate so much about life in so few words..Jae
Thank you so much for the nice words, Jae.
Have to say I like the third one best. Although I will add that it should be "She and her mother" as the subject of the clause or sentence. I liked the dialogue and the idea of a child demanding and being so self-assured about what was best in life. The first seemed to reach too hard to get the three words in, and I shudder to read about another's heart break. Too melodramatic usually for me. My heart has broken enough for me in this lifetime. I thoroughly liked that you wrote three quick glimpses into different stories using the prompts and asked commenters to pick one. It makes for a great blog read!
I will change that, Di. Thank you. I need an editor even for blog posts...lol
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