Thursday, October 2, 2008

A Slow Death

Here's this weeks poem for the Simply Snickers poetry prompt.

The clouds weep
The oceans wail
Rubbish clutters the beaches
And the ozone fails

Trash abounds
Pollution runs wild
The climate suffers
The effects of style

More concerned with how things look
Getting places in a hurry
Bigger and better is the cry
As the world dies

7 comments:

Sanjay Chhabria said...

One of the great poetries I have ever read on Earth...

So true and very nicely put in words...

Angel said...

I'm glad you liked it. I don't know about it being great...lol, but it's nice to be appreciated.

Lethe said...

no, I agree it's an amazing poem

Angel said...

Thank you so much. I'm glad y'all like the poem this well.

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

What a poetic warning! Well done.

Thanks for participating again at SIMPLY SNICKERS. Next week's prompt is up!

Blessings,
Linda

SIMPLY SNICKERS – weekly poetry prompts

Eddie D. said...

Tragically true and unsettling...

Angel said...

Thank you both. That saddest part is that it IS true!

I'll be checking out this weeks prompt soon.